Honorable Mention, Writing Division
Valley of Compassion by Chris McAvoy
Big Ideas. Big Names. A Big Year. Michael Pollan, Alfie Kohn, Mary Oliver, Dalai Lama on his way, Special Olympics, record salmon counts, an historic election. Local food, building community, DNA, nature-spirit poems, ‘yes we can’ Softly, consistently reminding us Until we can call the thoughts our own: Compassion in our food, in our schools, in the nation. Compassion. Compassion. It floats the mind Lifts the soul. But, lest we forget, the intimate and local also instruct…. "Have you ever been on the other side of the tracks?" He says abruptly as he pulls the remaining bread and canned beans from the table It's 7 pm. I've been busy moving and working now for 13 hours. I sit, tired, with my son and my students to the last of the 16 pounds of joes we have slopped onto plates in a mad and mindless fury "You don't know what it does...to your head...to your heart…” he laments “…Until you've been there" introducing us to unkown pains. He's young. Maybe 25. As we look in his eyes, the wall of separation crumbles. Together, we shoulder his burden. He thanks us in a way that no frilly hallmark card ever had the nerve to imagine, and then slips into the night air. We sit in silence. Unmoving. We breathe. We work to digest what has been put on our plates. We are suddenly aware of our families. Our warm homes. Our comfortable beds. We are aware of our "stress" jobs we love, bills, family frictions, college applications, homework. We are painfully aware of our own fetid complaints. He helps us talk about love and family and pain and longing. We are family. We clean up. We go home. We carry a new stone in our heart. A new commitment. He remains nameless. and homeless. He teaches us about pain and suffering and service and hope. It will not be on a test. It will not leave us untested. We are the ones we’ve been waiting for… Yes. We. Can? |
| Writing Winners
1st Place: Our Voyage through the Valley by Jack Reidy Read story
2nd Place: Morning Hike by Summer Smith Read story
3rd Place: Home Sweet Home by Tony Taylor Read story
Honorable Mention: Valley of Compassion by Chris McAvoy Read story
Staff Favorite: Full Circle by Teresa McGoffin Read story
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